Staring Down theBarrell of A Gun - Jaandlu

J - Wonderful post. (and you say you're a reader, not a writer!) I hope all is well now...I have to go read it again...
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"Despite everything, I believe that people are really good at heart." - Anne Frank

Ja, you write well about a very scary situation. I like it alot. Please write more and do allow us a chance to read it.

I have one quibble. I'm pretty sure that G said that pie is fine but prefers cream filled cannoli.
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Thank you both very much.

I changed that for you G, ahm, I mean ginjg because I want it to be somewhat true to life even though it is fiction(mostly just the part about the pie). Thanks for bringing it to my attention.

Ja


BTW I think the guy with the beard might have been the AG but I can't prove it yet. So be on your toes for guys with beards.
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jaandlu wrote:

Thank you both very much. I changed that for you G, ahm, I mean ginjg because I want it to be somewhat true to life even though it is fiction(mostly just the part about the pie). Thanks for bringing it to my attention. Ja BTW I think the guy with the beard might have been the AG but I can't prove it yet. So be on your toes for guys with beards.

Oops, I wasn't editing. I was being crude.
Now you've gone and stuck a joke in the middle of a very serious story.
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To Learn is to Know
To Know is to Love
To Love is our aim

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Why should we bother with immortality when we are eternal?

Ginjg wrote:

Oops, I wasn't editing. I was being crude. Now you've gone and stuck a joke in the middle of a very serious story.

So your not getting the humor of it I suspect. The chatroom is there for comic relief. You were the one's that made everything a little bit easier to deal with. The humor is suppose to be in the pie part. Keeps things from getting to heavy. So I think I went and improved a part of the story that I worried about being effective anyway. So thanks again Ginjg

Ja
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Anytime my friend.

The humor of it was why I was compelled to make the joke. I can't resist a good straight line.

I just didn't want you to think I was trying to make changes to your creative work.
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To Learn is to Know
To Know is to Love
To Love is our aim

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Why should we bother with immortality when we are eternal?

If they are suggestions that resonate with me I will make the changes I feel appropriate. If not I won't take it personal. Feel free to speak up, that's why I put it out there.

Ja
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I honestly never thought I would live this long. Now I don't know what to do with myself.