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Chain Story 2: Electric Boogaloo
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The only thing he saw was a large emerald castle.

"Was this Oz?" John thought to himself "Or was this heaven?" John grimised and tried to shake away the illusion that stood befor him. He begain to walk toward the castle.

It was a ways off and it was pretty much straight going so he walked.

And walked...

And he was still walking.

The castle got bigger and he realized it was further away than he thought. So he kept walking.

And walking.


And walking.
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John thought he saw saw something ahead. As it turned out it was just more of the castle coming up befor him. It now ocurred to John that over this flat plain what he was seeing was the curvature of the earth. The castle must be huge as he was still not seeing all of it. He walked on.

And walked...

...and walked...

...and walked...
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Still walking...

...and walking...

...and walking...
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Then John tripped over a lady bug breaking his neck in three places.

Lying on the floor gasping for breath John curses the world and dies.

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Lying on the floor gasping for breath John curses the world and dies.

That curse was the Dirty Red Jackel. He would be a scourge on the earth. It was from John's curse that all the world would be blown up because of a man named Jerimiah who hung out in the seediest places and probably had the clap.
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"It must be thursday," he sighed. "I could never get the hang of Thursdays."

Meanwhile, a giant turtle was snowboarding off of a roof. "I told them I would achieve the required velocity" he muttered to himself.
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