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My first published short story...please comment

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mxlemore



Joined: 18 Sep 2008
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Location: Georgia
My first published short story...please comment  Reply with quote  

Instead of posting the story in it's entirety here, I've provided a link where you can leave comments. Please feel free to be brutally honest. Do not worry about trying to sugar-coat your feelings if you think the story is not well written. Thanks!

http://www.be-a-better-writer.com/when-the-dead-whisper.html

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wlstone



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I would love to read it, but it seems the link is broken? :/
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Post Tue Jun 16, 2009 8:51 pm   View user's profile Send private message
mxlemore



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Yes, so it is. I did not realize that on June 1st the lady that runs the site removed all of the stories she had not purchased Sad

So, I have put it on my own website until I can find another market for it. In the meantime, I am working on some other writing projects. Feel free to go to the Library section of my website to read some of my stories and an excerpt from the novel I've been slaving over.

http://www.jrmclemore.com/library.html

The current stories available for reading are:
When the Dead Whisper
Memories of My Dad
The Shadow People (an excerpt)

I hope you enjoy!
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Glennergy



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Which one were you looking for a critique on?
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mxlemore



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Heck, any of them! Very Happy

No. I was asking for feedback on When the Dead Whisper. But, seriously, if you want to read them all and comment, I wouldn't be opposed to it Wink

The above URL is no longer valid. Well, it is, but I've changed the format of my site now and that old link still will show the site in an adverse way. So, if you want to read any of my stories and comment:

Visit http://www.jrmclemore.com/ and navigate to the Library via my menu.

Click on any of these little icons to read the stories that have them. Not all have been published on my site.

There's one I'd really like to post and get feedback on, Hush, Hush My Love, but it is going to appear in a forthcoming issue of Shroud Magazine, so I can't publish due the contract I signed.

Please give me some feedback, but most of all Enjoy! Very Happy
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