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Rizak the Really Horrible



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MADE TO FEEL UNWELCOME

Last edited by Rizak the Really Horrible on Mon May 15, 2006 11:30 am; edited 2 times in total

Post Mon May 01, 2006 3:09 pm   View user's profile Send private message
Kianu



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I did, but when I copied and pasted, it came out the way you saw it. I'll try to fiddle with it.
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Post Mon May 01, 2006 3:48 pm   View user's profile Send private message
Lisa M



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Kianu - I think you have the beginnings of a good story here. I kinda of read it as a summary -- each paragraph, almost, could evolve into a chapter - storyline. Keep going!

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Rizak the Really Horrible



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MADE TO FEEL UNWELCOME

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Kianu



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Thanks- I struggle with not rushing the story. I have so much to get out foundationally in order for the reader to sympathize with the character when the weird shit starts happening.
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