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Boota



Joined: 09 Apr 2004
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Due to popular demand I have begun writing some more porn. I know some people might be shocked to learn this, but apparently I have a very dirty mind. Who woulda thunk it?

I'm taking a break before I start editing my new novel so that I can record the new album next week. But instead of doing nothing with the spare seventeen minutes a day I have available I have bowed to the pressure and started on a new smut story. There is a problem, however. I'm a better writer now than I was when I did the first porn story that everyone seemed to love. Now I can't let go of the idea of story and character rather than just some smoking hot sex. I'm putting quite a bit of effort and planning into this little fuck story, taking time to build characters and story behind them instead of just throwing a penis and a vagina in a room and letting them fight it out. (Somehow the vagina always seems to win.)

I typically don't write smut. I mostly skip sex scenes in my books, unless they're funny. (There are a couple funny sex scenes in the new book.) I wonder if anyone wants to read the story, or if they're just going to fast forward through to the "good parts"? I watched a porn tape with my girlfriend's dad and some of his friends back when I was in high school and he watched the whole thing in fast forward, cackling and yelling, "Look at him go! Look at him go!"

So the question is this: How do you like your smut? Do you want a story or just get right to the bumping of uglies? Do you need to know the characters or do you just want to see their genitals duel it out in the Coliseum?
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Goudron



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That's cool that your girlfriends dad and his friends were porn stars... I guess.

Smut needs some back story, but from a male's perspective, the backstory will only be read once if at all, and only skimmed over. The nasty bits might be read multiple times in the future.

For females, I suspect the backstory is more important. So I guess you should ask yourself who your audience is. Male or female preverts? Forgive me for the broad sexist generalizations, but the man asked for advice.
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Naked and Famous



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I like to have a little backstory there, and the steamier the better. You know what I mean? And lots of dirty talk.

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Ginjg



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your erotic fairytale was great, but not quite porn. It's the raciest of yours I knew about.

If your writing hotter than that, I definitely will read it. If you've got other porn you haven't shared with the divas you're in big trouble.

intro the characters just enough so we want them to get some and get into the action. Hot and graphic.
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BIGjuevos



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Always start off with a good sex scene, that's the whole point of reading porno, but of course, I think that the porno should develope the story, not vice-versa.

Anyways, I'd love to critique.
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Boota



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Thanks for the input everyone.

Goudron, I think this story will likely appeal more broadly to female perverts. That may give me a little more leeway to slip some story in there. There's quite a bit of build up before anything sexual happens. Character development and a slow seduction. It seems important to do more with the characters, but I don't know if that is just a case of barking up the wrong tree.

N and F, I'll keep the dirty talk in mind. In fact it will probably work well within the context of the story as part of the build up.

Ginjg, I guess porn is in the eye of the beholder. From someone who typically glosses over sex scenes, The Man In The Woods was porn. LOL. I'm going to try to get the characters into the action quickly, but still hit the important points of the how and the why they came to be together. I haven't written anything else in the erotica genre, but I have an idea for an erotic horror novel that is going to smoke. And then make you puke. And then smoke some more.

BIGjuevos, that seems like sound advice. I might have to punch something into the story a little earlier to keep the pages turning. (Or scrolling as the case may be.) When I get it done I'll let you know and you can have a go at critiquing it. No telling when it will be finished, though.

Thanks again. Smile
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zip



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Heh, you said slip some story in there...

Female pervert signing in. I'd love to critique it for you. For me, the characters must be believably real. Anticipation is good. Surprise and the unexpected are good. Graphic is best, but it's gottabe sexy graphic, not stupid graphic. I hope that makes sense to you. Based on what I've read of yours, I have high expectations.

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Boota



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Thanks zip! I think we're on the same page with the approach I'm taking. I'm just going to write it and see what happens. The story is expanding more than I intended. The characters have a little depth already. I like them and want them to get laid. Really good like. Smile
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zip



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Boota wrote:
Thanks zip! I think we're on the same page with the approach I'm taking. I'm just going to write it and see what happens. The story is expanding more than I intended. The characters have a little depth already. I like them and want them to get laid. Really good like. Smile


Laughing Can't wait to read it! Hurry up, willya?

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Boota



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Sorry it's taking so long. I haven't been feeling like writing for a little while. I'll probably be back on it after the weekend. The story is getting a little bigger than I expected. It might end up beeing a fairly long piece. But that's okay. It's only because I'm enjoying the characters and taking my time with the buildup.
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Goudron



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Boota wrote:
It might end up beeing a fairly long piece.


That goes without saying doesn't it?
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zip



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Buildup is good, but I can only handle so much anticipation.

teasing ya. do take your time. Twisted Evil

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Boota



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Goudron, I tried to keep it brief, but my short story is already longer than i had anticipated. I'm a wordy bastard at times, I guess.

zip, I did a little work on it last night, and I've been thinking on it for a little while, even while I'm not "working" on it. I'll try to get back at it soon.
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Well, you have about 12 euphemisms in this thread alone.
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Ginjg



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We do have other writers on the board who could share their works of smut until Boota's got his done.

Boota, could you post a link to "Man in the Woods" again. Some may not havehad a chance to read it yet.
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