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Nallard's Chapter One

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Lynn



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So I guess I'm a slow reader.

I really liked this. Both the characters and the way the story is told. It's a really nice opening with enough information to get the story going while still holding back enough to make the story interesting. You and your sense of timing and pacing, grrr (sorry, do I sound bitter?)

Good dialogue, especially contrasted with the inner thoughts.

Do we get to see more?
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